I Feel So Alone
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•30 Jul 2020
lately I feel so alone, nobody hits me up and I'm stuck never had someone in could call my own its lonely walking down this road fake friends I didn't have to know the same ones that fuck me over and when I turn around they just turn ghost I feel like I'm at an all time low I am depressed and hurts me to know my ex is happy and I cant seem to cope shes ignoring all the text messages I wrote, my anxiety's high my medication is low, I am so stressed and I hate being home I sit here thinking everything alone I wish I had somebody to hold damn I'm sick and tired of putting up a front like I'm happy but I'm really in the slumps I try to stay strong screaming I dont give a fuck, but anyone who get it ain't the one, I wanna put down my walls and open up but I gotta just give up.
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well written
@mc2squared thank you so much man, I really do appreciate it.
🗣DAMN, this is REAL stuff here you put down. It killed me to give you anything but nines and tens because it I like the creative content in the lyrics are so powerful but I take the judging seriously and try to help people get better from my critiquing in a positive way I hope in the end. I am just one person with an opinion in the end also so don’t take what one person says as anything more or less than that, however everything was amazing and because I have a problem with this myself I noticed in your delivery I hear a lot of breathing and other white noise picked up But there’s also an element to it that works with the song because it’s so raw and you can hear that you just spelling it out and I love that part but then there were certain parts were you got a little bit mono tone and lost emotions they were very fleeting and again I’m just being nitpicky but I feel like this track is so worth redoing if you have it in you and if not redoing the whole thing just those little bitty parts but needless to say this is true art from you really put it out there and I am a fan thank you ⚛️|🖤ⓂⒸ2̷🆂🆀🆄🅰🆁🅴🅳♠️|🈯️ 🇦🇫|ꪜꫀ𝓽ꫀ𝘳ꪖꪀ𝘴☠️ℙⱤØĐɄ₵₮łØ₦ֆ|🇺🇸 Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10
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