Try me
Aye what you know about this life dawg fuck the 9 to 5 shit man im getting paper tommygunzz on the track! yeah okay you talking all that shit bitch I'll see you later you wanna be me why the fuck are you a hater I'm just trying to ride the wave and youre trying to pull me under you got my floaties in a bunch man feel this thunder stick my dick down your throat bitch try to talk now nobody can hear you get that dick out your fuckin mouth I just want to chill around and get high smoke my weed up sit back and fucking vibe bitch I'm throwing heat up but you haters keep trying me and my fucking grind! that's fucking riight I'm spitting bars and getting fucking signed you didnt know its hard til its on a silver platter quit fucking up my vibe its mind over matter I dont give a fuck grab the bar under the ladder I'll whoop your ass so bad you'll need a wheelchair keep fucking round with me shit you'll need some sleepwear I'll put you in a fucking coffin and make you fuckin stay there I'm tired of these bitches you think I'm soft bitch watch me pull up with a fucking stick I just want to see you dance while I point it at your feet who's laughing now its tommygunzz on the beat
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