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its a new day N New age. my views changed...don't quite like that nothing can ever stay the same but overtime learning that u can't stop change never noticing it had been happening in me n damn I've been tripping but understand now its How u choose them choices you make especially when u get a ill shaken up feeling like breaking up whatever the fuck just to not feel out of luck n like a punk its happened more than once. Ive lived it,maybe a lil too much. I guess I kinda get why they hate on me but never did I have that thought before cuz I didn't raise me above anyone else but in the end it don't matter cuz a hater will always aim to see that you fall always wishing hellish things to taint you tampering n tampering anywhere they seeze to fit-hit you When u least expect. overtime has me feeling weak-giving up giving in but fuck that u need to think again God is the only man who can have me rethink anythiing in life who do u think you are ? not him! . I stand under him n he knows I am not perfect...never claiming that I was we are all human we all bleedthe same we all feel the pain but the choice is our owndecision making us exactly who we are so get out of the hating maybe check the choices you make n take a moment too really think that hate aimed at another isn't gunna do u shit, u ain't one with your self make the change that happens by yourself instead of letting all the bullshit run it. many see me like joke ,always poking n playing with my life taken what's good in it. all so y'all can go on to live painting yall pretty facade so no one can tell that its rot . but no matter what I'll walk through even crawling if I have too cuz it feels as if I can barely stand up these days, the weight from the shame I feel By the hate. placed over me this dark cloud never leaves...burdens me . constantly gots me searching for brighter days...stay claiming u win but at what cost taking pieces of life from me ? we all will meet our maker one day eventually having to pay. only I still find myself here wanting peace -praying for everyone to be great and when its our time- our judgement day to be worry free finally from the suffering on earth aka hell we all eventually feel. then only I believe will our toughest times be over.
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its a new day N New age. my views changed...don't quite like that nothing can ever stay the same but overtime learning that u can't stop change never noticing it had been happening in me n damn I've been tripping but understand now its How u choose them choices you make especially when u get a ill shaken up feeling like breaking up whatever the fuck just to not feel out of luck n like a punk its happened more than once. Ive lived it,maybe a lil too much. I guess I kinda get why they hate on me but never did I have that thought before cuz I didn't raise me above anyone else but in the end it don't matter cuz a hater will always aim to see that you fall always wishing hellish things to taint you tampering n tampering anywhere they seeze to fit-hit you When u least expect. overtime has me feeling weak-giving up giving in but fuck that u need to think again God is the only man who can have me rethink anythiing in life who do u think you are ? not him! . I stand under him n he knows I am not perfect...never claiming that I was we are all human we all bleedthe same we all feel the pain but the choice is our owndecision making us exactly who we are so get out of the hating maybe check the choices you make n take a moment too really think that hate aimed at another isn't gunna do u shit, u ain't one with your self make the change that happens by yourself instead of letting all the bullshit run it. many see me like joke ,always poking n playing with my life taken what's good in it. all so y'all can go on to live painting yall pretty facade so no one can tell that its rot . but no matter what I'll walk through even crawling if I have too cuz it feels as if I can barely stand up these days, the weight from the shame I feel By the hate. placed over me this dark cloud never leaves...burdens me . constantly gots me searching for brighter days...stay claiming u win but at what cost taking pieces of life from me ? we all will meet our maker one day eventually having to pay. only I still find myself here wanting peace -praying for everyone to be great and when its our time- our judgement day to be worry free finally from the suffering on earth aka hell we all eventually feel. then only I believe will our toughest times be over.
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10
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it's not bad it alrighhhhhttttt... Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10