my life

Coetzee

Author

7 years ago

i can't begin to tell you why my life is headed down down down maybe its because my mind is all the way undergorund ground ground but look what i found the sun comes out wow I'm on top now till i fall back down looking for vises to hold me down I just wanna make my family proud so i pour it all out theres a leak in the spout how can i make it out heads all filled with doubt but i give up now till my last breath runs out im gonna put this music out my wife my son my life thats all i care about thats right

LuoDollar vibes

6 years ago

ur the best Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10

D'king'50

6 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

🐐HENNO FREESTYLEKING👑

6 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10

Void_Raps

6 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

Coetzee

Author

7 years ago

@TylerConlay thanks man! and yeah bro ill check it out

TyRay

7 years ago

not bad man good job keep it up feel free to check out some of my stuff

Sapphire Johnson

2 years ago

Love ❤️‍🔥