can we just chillax

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7 years ago

your voice is trash you sound like a girl screaming

7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10

7 years ago

Damn Jacob your fr poppin @JBreezyYeooo

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7 years ago

that with was ok

7 years ago

damn bro 🔥🔥🔥🔥 nice hey could u peep my page and let me know

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7 years ago

not bad original nice beat good work fam

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check my account

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I like this dudes idea

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7 years ago

@NO_VOTES_TIL31st_MEvsQC_OTW bro

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7 years ago

@NO_VOTES_TIL31st_MEvsQC_OTW thanks vro

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7 years ago

@JBreezyYeooo good attitude

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@JBreezyYeooo No hated here. just opinionated advice. Which is just advice driven from someone's opinion. I can not even give a constructive criticismatic opinion on the lyrical bars. Those were flossing nice. 👌

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7 years ago

@blessedismyrapname even if it was hatred hate helps too to make myself better or if its cancerous hate then that's a problem b ur all good

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@JBreezyYeooo Anytime. Didn't mean to hate in any way. I think your bars and bar flow are crisp. 👌

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7 years ago

@blessedismyrapname glooks broo

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7 years ago

that's good bruh

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great bars bro, but you might want to work on the hook a little bit with the r&b singing type stuff. I'm not hating I'm just giving opinionated advice. I honestly am not the best with most singing, so I really practice with r&b songs that hit the heart and soul to me. and I'm probably comfortable only singing a very few songs but after singing some of that Chris Brown "Poppin" song so much I actually got complemented buy an attractive female. and I don't really sing seriously as much as I rap seriously. but that's the best advice I got as someone who's never had singing lessons and taken singing too seriously professionally. if you want to check out what real singing is to me and a beautiful voice, go ahead and scope out "Eyes On The Prize" on my page. it's not even me singing it, it's my neighbor that's literally from the same hometown I'm from. he's more of a singer and I'm more of a rapper but if I could say I've ever heard someone sing with a beautiful voice in real life in person, it would be him. I know he's going to make it if he keeps pushing. but I'll stop babbling now. your bars were awesome. 🤙

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7 years ago

@rapstar1992 glooks

7 years ago

good flow buddy peep my new track

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7 years ago

peep my battle homie if u hv time

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