life is hard
Lil Croccy97 Plays
•24 Apr 2019
Look life is hard Hope I make it It's a risk But I'll take it Feeling like I'm living, stuck in the basement I'm just trying to get a higher placement Life is hard But I'll make it I can't wait a long time I'm anxious I've just gotta get off The pavement So they hear me across The nation Life is hard
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thanks for the pointers, I'm 17, this was my first time working with equalizers
you need a lot of work to be honest. your beat is WWAAY to loud. your voice to low , the delivery needs more OOOMMFF you need a picture up you need more metaphors. But other then that i love the concept of your style. its very smooth layed back and inviting. kinda like a drake flow...gotta maje it longer. it needs a verse or 2. that's a great hook. use a bigger vocabulary when u rap. go to Rhymezone.com to help you expand your vocabulary in making music. your very talented just need guidance. im new at this as well and still learning new stuff everyday. how old are u ?
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