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the whole track was smoove but try to land them bars on their mark, you have s tendency to run on jus one or two words... jus play wit ur word count to fit the track but good shit homey keep it up
I feel like @PaceStearnes opinion is best on this. Dont make it sound like ur reading lyrics, more like ur rapping nahmean... but like the lyrics and good beat choice 💯
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🔥🔥🔥/5 the whole track was smoove but try to land them bars on their mark, you have s tendency to run on jus one or two words... jus play wit ur word count to fit the track but good shit homey keep it up
thank you fam👌💯🔥
man,,this fucking dope....fosho....
@SliMThuG Good job, I would recommend the input above . speed changes, voice inflection, punchline emphasis make it gold. keep it up bro!
💯💯💯Thanks for the advice
its rlly good just try to add emotion to your voice when i first started i was like this too if u add emotion to your voice, itll be a lot better💯
imma try improving in the next track❤💯💯🔥
Nice job hunnie my only advice is it's lacking energy and confidence for me 😊👍🎶🎶🎙🎶🎶🎧🎶🎶🎉👏
@BlackG6 thanks for the advice FAM💯
@SliMThuG let it flow off your tongue
@bp03 👈 what he said
Thanks man, i understanding and I'll try harder in the next track🔥👌💯,thanks for having my back fam
I feel like @PaceStearnes opinion is best on this. Dont make it sound like ur reading lyrics, more like ur rapping nahmean... but like the lyrics and good beat choice 💯
Nice Verse 👌 salute bro keep Shinning 💯
appreciate it FAM🔥💯
dope man good stuff, respect 👊
thanks for the support y'all💯🔥
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