I did a song on this beat.
It's a good one.
The message and content you're trying to get across is good.
Your delivery is off and a little too intense in some parts, and not enough in others.
If you spent time on it and perfected it this would be a nice song.
Keep working man.
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@barsoverbs thanks for the feedback. i appreciate the feedback. im working on getting better everyday
I did a song on this beat. It's a good one. The message and content you're trying to get across is good. Your delivery is off and a little too intense in some parts, and not enough in others. If you spent time on it and perfected it this would be a nice song. Keep working man.
let me get some feedback! this is my first drop on here!