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hey god, its me somt mean to bother ya but can you help me see what you see im just so lost im not quite sure where im supose to be i know we havent been talkong latley and im sorry i just feel deep inside you actually fucking hate me im afraid we drifted apart and im a little scared what awaits me im sick of being scared on the daily scared of whats next and doing things insanley i mean i get it i really do i havent been the best but i really think i making a break through sick of feeling beaten and used i relized ehats important and what i need to pursue amd need higher expectations and be the wayi need to live up too im sorry i know your there my apologies way over due im sick of being a fucking loser god and that much is the truth speak up i cant hear you you cant blame me if its hard not misconstrue im feel blind what im supose to see throughout my point of veiw i just wanna step back and undo all the things i made people believe that were untrue tbh i ust wanna be a better person at heart all these drugs and mistakes have just fucking ripped me apart is there a walmart nearby i nedd to find some spare larts need restart and lut smart the old me somehow get through this and embark on journey to a new beggining sick of just waiting to die its about time i start fuxking living im stranded out at see no more drowing im gonna start swimming first and foremost all the mistakes ive made consider them forgivin im commitin to finding all the broken peices im missing i know i buried em somewhere i just need to start digging times a ticking i need to start searching for some minuets maybe even some hours or days itll take me months to bounce back or till im finally okay then hopefully a year from now i wont be begging when i pray im really gonna do this and give up this fasad so i realized what matters not everything needs a response wow im in shock who knew this eould happen from just little converstaion with god amen
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hey god, its me somt mean to bother ya but can you help me see what you see im just so lost im not quite sure where im supose to be i know we havent been talkong latley and im sorry i just feel deep inside you actually fucking hate me im afraid we drifted apart and im a little scared what awaits me im sick of being scared on the daily scared of whats next and doing things insanley i mean i get it i really do i havent been the best but i really think i making a break through sick of feeling beaten and used i relized ehats important and what i need to pursue amd need higher expectations and be the wayi need to live up too im sorry i know your there my apologies way over due im sick of being a fucking loser god and that much is the truth speak up i cant hear you you cant blame me if its hard not misconstrue im feel blind what im supose to see throughout my point of veiw i just wanna step back and undo all the things i made people believe that were untrue tbh i ust wanna be a better person at heart all these drugs and mistakes have just fucking ripped me apart is there a walmart nearby i nedd to find some spare larts need restart and lut smart the old me somehow get through this and embark on journey to a new beggining sick of just waiting to die its about time i start fuxking living im stranded out at see no more drowing im gonna start swimming first and foremost all the mistakes ive made consider them forgivin im commitin to finding all the broken peices im missing i know i buried em somewhere i just need to start digging times a ticking i need to start searching for some minuets maybe even some hours or days itll take me months to bounce back or till im finally okay then hopefully a year from now i wont be begging when i pray im really gonna do this and give up this fasad so i realized what matters not everything needs a response wow im in shock who knew this eould happen from just little converstaion with god amen
thank you it is just a rough draft but i realy appriciate
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 5/10 Impression: 8/10