Homocide

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Homocide

I challenge you to rap about real world issues, fuck outta here with your hate rap, be the change you want to see in this world! still got alot to learn in this rap game, so any advice or critiscm would be great! Lyrics: (note i edited during recording so some lyrics may be out) Homocide: everday theres homicide lock your doors go inside cus these people are expressing the pain that they feel inside homicides like pesticide natural law gettin testified bout time we put aside our differencies wheres the fucks our spiritual guides mass shootings school shootings wheres the fucking court rulings cus its family that were losing aww shit were one in the same only difference. our name lifes the name of the game unfortunately some of us are untame get mad oh your sad? well too bad go find a punching bag before you end up in a mother fucking body bag i wrote this cus of X yeah lifes hard sometimes its perplexed and complexed but just know well see you in the next but this why we create these rhymes cus all you fuckers commiting crimes cus all you fuckers taking people from their mother fucking primes but for me this is mother fucking flex time daily news about jews blacks whites and hispanics all the them in fuckin panics some of them are fuckin manics who the fuck you think you are ill tell you why im rappin these bars cus you all rap about fast cars or how your as high as the stars i rap about the worlds scars i rap about reaching for stars you all dissin hidin behind avatars but does your game offer any memoirs? nahh didnt think so this raps about homicide so express what you feel inside but feel free to use this guide to push your violent tendancies aside cus its peace i rap for. world wide.

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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

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8 years ago

@SamG cheers bro! ill work on it! @Hood_Santa cheers bro alwaya lookin to improve 💪💪

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8 years ago

I agree with sam, this is good but could be improved

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8 years ago

Instrumentals cool, I like it, your lyrics are dope, I feel you have a message you want to put across, you are good writer and you are on beat and I feel your emotion One pointer, you sound like you speaking rather ran rapping in a way, you gotta emphasise your words more and pick up the energy 💯

8 years ago

nice track good flow

Good effort. 💯 KEEP PUSHING

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