the bars are on point, put some emotion into it and practice the lines to be able to spit them without the hesitation, do that and this will be fire
Bars: 10/10
Delivery: 4/10
Impression: 8/10
Peeps thinking
they be steezy
And making raps
is super easy
But rhyming
to a beat
Dont make
an MC
Same as
diagnosing
a fever
Doesn't mean
you're a MD
Rhyming about
women and crimes
Or about
the tough times
before you
was baller
And had to beg
for nickles
and dimes
It's all been
said and done
In a million
different rhymes
Time fast forward
Get off the
rewinds
and Leave
the past behind
Walk your
own line
Be your own light
Let the shit
brightly shine
Spit fire you
can proud of
And stand behind
Cause if you
ain't being real
With content
people can feel
You'll sink
faster than
A boat without
a keel
And begging again
To get that
next meal
Tossed aside
like an old
banana peel
Say goodbye
to the women
the rides
And your record deal
Thats my cue
To grab This mic
Then start to spew
My verbal assult
All over you
350 syllables a minute
In the venom i spit
And still i ain't
Breaking a sweat
Listen while I rhyme
The whole alphabet
All bitches chase
Dick every fucking given
Holiday indigo jiggalo
Keeping low
Making niggas
Owe payroll
Quickly reaching status'
Totally unbelievable
Victoriously
Wiping
Xerox'
Yelling
Zealously
See how Easily
I Went from a to z
And I did it flawlessly
If you think you
Can do this
Better than me
This is something
I have to see
Cause for me
These skills
Came naturally
Every line I'm
setting free
Didn't materialise
magically
They come from
the cheat sheet
I see with my mind's eye
then I can
Pick a random Beat
Clear my mind
Then start to speak
Im the saviour
Y'all been trying to seek
Risen up after
three days
But I ain't Jesus
I Wont turn
the other cheek
No I'm no Messiah
You all calling me
a social pariah
Still I rise forever higher
Yeah
Like the holy trinity
Y'all look to me
like I'm a deity
Getting wannabe MC's
To bow down
and even retire
Cuz you lacking
the skill set
That you require
To get close enough
To knock me off
the top of
this spire
Cause I'm like
a dragon
And All I
spit is fire
incinerating
your weak lines
Yeah
Like frodo
and samwise
Head on back
to the shire
Warn the
other villagers
About This dragon
spitting fire
Tell them all
a magic tale
And how the need
to avoid the
consequences
Is extremely dyer
Follow this advice.
And no one
needs to die here
Aquired Bitcoin
Crypto-currency
dont expect
fucking generosity
having intelligency
just keep learning
must never
offer philosophy
question responsibly
successfully
turn up victory
when x-pexting
you'll zero-out
x-specially with
venomous usurpers
take sellout routes
quickly pounce
obviously not
making loud
kolumps
just incase
hearing gives
forewarning ending
deals crafted by adultery
always
end badly
lies become clumsy
cuz when two dummies
become blinded by ecstasy
their spouses are always first to see
took advantage too greedily
never offering honesty
instead serving up indecency
for dessert blame them for jealousy
because acting kindfully
requires loyalty
honoring vows of matrimony
instead acting nastily
screaming obsenites
slandering you publicly
others begin questioning
what is the reality
who deserves their sympathies
in troubling times like these
unfortunatly usually unfairly
the cheaters claim victory
So don't feel woefully
because nothing is more xceptional
when that bitch left you
finally found zen
Yin yang exemplifies
Wholefully United
two souls
ripped quickly
Precisely opening
new methods
letting knowledge
jump in
helping grow
friendship ensuring
destructive characteristics
be avoided
Bringing complete
dedication equally
forgiving genuinely
having infinite
joy kindness
love missing
no opportunity
presented quickly
returning souls
torn up
viscously without
expectation yin yang
zips them back together again
well taking a lot of slack for spitting off beat... only been doing this for 6 months so I hope I can improve on that but maybe isolated lyrics will make those that find it hard to listen to my whole track if off beat...can now at least appreciate my lyrical content....
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the bars are on point, put some emotion into it and practice the lines to be able to spit them without the hesitation, do that and this will be fire Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 4/10 Impression: 8/10
@GaZflow the way you sound is fucking shit
Just stfu and make something better I know stalling cause you know you can't
I know that it's called an acapella spit dumb fuck 😂 @GaZflow
@MGenie and they're all better than your trash
@MGenie I have many ott Freestyle posted but this one has no beat
@Mysterious one of my fast flows
NICE WORK G FEREAL MAN
Peeps thinking they be steezy And making raps is super easy But rhyming to a beat Dont make an MC Same as diagnosing a fever Doesn't mean you're a MD Rhyming about women and crimes Or about the tough times before you was baller And had to beg for nickles and dimes It's all been said and done In a million different rhymes Time fast forward Get off the rewinds and Leave the past behind Walk your own line Be your own light Let the shit brightly shine Spit fire you can proud of And stand behind Cause if you ain't being real With content people can feel You'll sink faster than A boat without a keel And begging again To get that next meal Tossed aside like an old banana peel Say goodbye to the women the rides And your record deal Thats my cue To grab This mic Then start to spew My verbal assult All over you 350 syllables a minute In the venom i spit And still i ain't Breaking a sweat Listen while I rhyme The whole alphabet All bitches chase Dick every fucking given Holiday indigo jiggalo Keeping low Making niggas Owe payroll Quickly reaching status' Totally unbelievable Victoriously Wiping Xerox' Yelling Zealously See how Easily I Went from a to z And I did it flawlessly If you think you Can do this Better than me This is something I have to see Cause for me These skills Came naturally Every line I'm setting free Didn't materialise magically They come from the cheat sheet I see with my mind's eye then I can Pick a random Beat Clear my mind Then start to speak Im the saviour Y'all been trying to seek Risen up after three days But I ain't Jesus I Wont turn the other cheek No I'm no Messiah You all calling me a social pariah Still I rise forever higher Yeah Like the holy trinity Y'all look to me like I'm a deity Getting wannabe MC's To bow down and even retire Cuz you lacking the skill set That you require To get close enough To knock me off the top of this spire Cause I'm like a dragon And All I spit is fire incinerating your weak lines Yeah Like frodo and samwise Head on back to the shire Warn the other villagers About This dragon spitting fire Tell them all a magic tale And how the need to avoid the consequences Is extremely dyer Follow this advice. And no one needs to die here Aquired Bitcoin Crypto-currency dont expect fucking generosity having intelligency just keep learning must never offer philosophy question responsibly successfully turn up victory when x-pexting you'll zero-out x-specially with venomous usurpers take sellout routes quickly pounce obviously not making loud kolumps just incase hearing gives forewarning ending deals crafted by adultery always end badly lies become clumsy cuz when two dummies become blinded by ecstasy their spouses are always first to see took advantage too greedily never offering honesty instead serving up indecency for dessert blame them for jealousy because acting kindfully requires loyalty honoring vows of matrimony instead acting nastily screaming obsenites slandering you publicly others begin questioning what is the reality who deserves their sympathies in troubling times like these unfortunatly usually unfairly the cheaters claim victory So don't feel woefully because nothing is more xceptional when that bitch left you finally found zen Yin yang exemplifies Wholefully United two souls ripped quickly Precisely opening new methods letting knowledge jump in helping grow friendship ensuring destructive characteristics be avoided Bringing complete dedication equally forgiving genuinely having infinite joy kindness love missing no opportunity presented quickly returning souls torn up viscously without expectation yin yang zips them back together again
well taking a lot of slack for spitting off beat... only been doing this for 6 months so I hope I can improve on that but maybe isolated lyrics will make those that find it hard to listen to my whole track if off beat...can now at least appreciate my lyrical content....
They're shit
love it. xo