Okay Let me tell you, honestly I love that track. You are smart with the beat for sure thats a Perfect beat for it. You were lyrical, “you better get some sleep cuz your minds not right” thats just Hiphop man👏🏻 I like it alot! Bro just be a little louder too. Keep it man🔥
sometimes u gotta rearrange the words even take some out to get a placement for breath... practice rapping your verse while walking... Full delivery... that help with breathing control.... Check my shit...
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let me know what you think i run out of air quick so i miss a few words but fuck it lol
still lol this one
good bro hard work pay of keep it up
thanks for tge feedback gs
Good beat content wasn't to bad💯 Bars: 5/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 10/10
dude can rap💪🏼💪🏼💪🏼👿 Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10
more voice less beat sound,put emotion,feeling into song other than that it's alright
i get you g thanks alot for the honest feedback i like that shit real talk
Okay Let me tell you, honestly I love that track. You are smart with the beat for sure thats a Perfect beat for it. You were lyrical, “you better get some sleep cuz your minds not right” thats just Hiphop man👏🏻 I like it alot! Bro just be a little louder too. Keep it man🔥
@Left_eyes_Dead. thanks g and yeah i know lol thats kinda dumb lol 🎤M. B. A💯 REPIN
cant like it cuz I'm in the same crew but dope man
yea i know bro thanks for the feedback g
good shit, just need to put more character emphasis into your vocals.
thanks fem 🎤M. B. A💯
raw slept on you famm
thats actually not a dumb idea at all thanks fem
sometimes u gotta rearrange the words even take some out to get a placement for breath... practice rapping your verse while walking... Full delivery... that help with breathing control.... Check my shit...
ight gotchu g next track ima rip it
dope bruh...a little more aggression and u would be an animal
yea for sure let me know when i got a sick beat we could use to depends if u like it or not im pretty picky on beats lol