the youngster
john divine fine sign In the city where the shadows intertwine with the light, Every step I take, I’m chasin’ dreams through the night, Heart heavy, but the spirit's ready to fight, John Divine, in my mind, keep the vision in sight. Hustle hard, I was raised in the struggle and strife, Got my brothers by my side, we gon' thrive in this life, Lessons learned from the streets, pain sharp as a knife, But I rise like the sun, shining bright, full of life. Echoes of the past, they still linger and haunt, But I’m carving out a path, like a soldier on a front, Every verse that I spit, it’s a promise, I’ll flaunt, Legacy of kings, every move is a stunt. In the booth, I’m a prophet, spitting wisdom and truth, For the lost and the broken, I’m the voice of the youth, John Divine, in the grind, I’m the living proof, From the ashes, I’ll rise, keep my head up, aloof.
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john divine fine sign In the city where the shadows intertwine with the light, Every step I take, I’m chasin’ dreams through the night, Heart heavy, but the spirit's ready to fight, John Divine, in my mind, keep the vision in sight. Hustle hard, I was raised in the struggle and strife, Got my brothers by my side, we gon' thrive in this life, Lessons learned from the streets, pain sharp as a knife, But I rise like the sun, shining bright, full of life. Echoes of the past, they still linger and haunt, But I’m carving out a path, like a soldier on a front, Every verse that I spit, it’s a promise, I’ll flaunt, Legacy of kings, every move is a stunt. In the booth, I’m a prophet, spitting wisdom and truth, For the lost and the broken, I’m the voice of the youth, John Divine, in the grind, I’m the living proof, From the ashes, I’ll rise, keep my head up, aloof.
NOT bad at all Keep getting better every time
👏 Great work! Keep up the awesome vibes! 🎶 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Your talent is clear, but keep trying to enhance the quality! 💯
Damnnnn 🌪️ Killed it! 🎯 GANG GANG 🤘 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯