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Life hard, but I’m still breathin’, Cold nights had a youngin’ barely eatin’, Mama cried, I was fightin’ all my demons, Now I’m tryna make the whole world feel me speakin’. Life a risk, I’ma take it anyway, Had dark thoughts on them long lonely days, Tryna turn pain into diamonds out the rain, Now my name finna echo through the state. I was stuck in that basement, Heart broke, feelin’ vacant, Everybody switched sides, they was fakin’, Now I ride with that fire, no safety. I can’t sit around patient, Time flyin’, gotta chase it, Young nigga tired of sleepin’ on the pavement, Tryna put the whole fam in a spaceship. Life hard, but I’m chosen, Smile hurt ‘cause my heart still broken, Had scars way before I got motion, Now the crowd sing my pain every moment. I done cried in the dark by myself, Ain’t nobody ever slide when I needed help, Now they see me goin’ up, want a piece themselves, Funny how success make love reappear itself. Life hard… Still thank God I ain’t quit though, Came from them nights eatin’ noodles by the window, Now I’m dreamin’ platinum plaques and a Benzo.
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Life hard, but I’m still breathin’, Cold nights had a youngin’ barely eatin’, Mama cried, I was fightin’ all my demons, Now I’m tryna make the whole world feel me speakin’. Life a risk, I’ma take it anyway, Had dark thoughts on them long lonely days, Tryna turn pain into diamonds out the rain, Now my name finna echo through the state. I was stuck in that basement, Heart broke, feelin’ vacant, Everybody switched sides, they was fakin’, Now I ride with that fire, no safety. I can’t sit around patient, Time flyin’, gotta chase it, Young nigga tired of sleepin’ on the pavement, Tryna put the whole fam in a spaceship. Life hard, but I’m chosen, Smile hurt ‘cause my heart still broken, Had scars way before I got motion, Now the crowd sing my pain every moment. I done cried in the dark by myself, Ain’t nobody ever slide when I needed help, Now they see me goin’ up, want a piece themselves, Funny how success make love reappear itself. Life hard… Still thank God I ain’t quit though, Came from them nights eatin’ noodles by the window, Now I’m dreamin’ platinum plaques and a Benzo.
🙌 Your lyrics are raw and real, keep it up! 💥🎤 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥