L.O.V.E

Yo, listen up, let me share a tale 'Bout love, the good stuff, it's never gonna fail It's the beat of my heart, the rhythm of my soul Got me feelin' like a king, when I'm in control I'm talkin' 'bout that fire, that burns deep inside The kind of love that makes you wanna take a ride It's the highs and lows, the ups and downs But when it's real, it's gonna turn you around Girl, you're the one I want, the one I need Got me hooked, got me tripped, got me feelin' like a freak You're the sweetest thing, the icing on my cake Got me feelin' like a king, got me feelin' no pain, no mistake Love's a rollercoaster, it's got its twists and turns But when it's real, it's worth the ride, it will learn It's the sacrifice, the compromise, the trust But when it's real, it's forever, it's a must So if you're lookin' for love, don't give up the quest It's out there, it's waitin', it's a beautiful mess Just be yourself, don't try to be someone else Love will find you, when you're feelin' the wealth How's that? I wrote a short rap about love, focusing on the emotions and feelings. Want me to add or change anything?