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I'm in the trap, got the weight on my shoulders, Bitch tellin' me get sober, but I'm feelin' colder, Countin' these racks, while the world's on my back, Heart full of pain, but I'm never lookin' back. Pourin' up the Henny, drownin' out the stress, Got these demons in my head, man, I'm feelin' blessed, She sayin' I'm a mess, but I'm just tryna flex, Livin' life fast, ain't no time for regrets. Came from the bottom, now I'm risin' like the sun, But the shadows still lurk, and they weigh a ton, Street life taught me, trust nobody but the crew, Got my day ones with me, yeah, we pushin' through. Hustle every night, while they sleepin' on the grind, Got my mind on my money, leavin' worries behind, Bitch tellin' me to change, but I'm stuck in my ways, In this savage life, man, I'm just tryna blaze.
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I'm in the trap, got the weight on my shoulders, Bitch tellin' me get sober, but I'm feelin' colder, Countin' these racks, while the world's on my back, Heart full of pain, but I'm never lookin' back. Pourin' up the Henny, drownin' out the stress, Got these demons in my head, man, I'm feelin' blessed, She sayin' I'm a mess, but I'm just tryna flex, Livin' life fast, ain't no time for regrets. Came from the bottom, now I'm risin' like the sun, But the shadows still lurk, and they weigh a ton, Street life taught me, trust nobody but the crew, Got my day ones with me, yeah, we pushin' through. Hustle every night, while they sleepin' on the grind, Got my mind on my money, leavin' worries behind, Bitch tellin' me to change, but I'm stuck in my ways, In this savage life, man, I'm just tryna blaze.
more energetic, more words. clearer thoughts would be better
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wake em up 🗣 keep grinding 💪 keep it up