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You definitely aint about to be even close to as foul as me Your allergic to the progress like its a really bad allergy Lowes Home Depot Do it yourself Weekend Warrior  Change the locks out and get cough syrup pouring more I push the envelope at the post office till they cant refuse it These fake ass Gs aint doing shit they drop dueces give excuses Baller bitch you couldnt define a baller if you had a dollar I make them bitches jealous ill never text her or caller Condition that bitch till shes in the kitchen cooking with Gas mother fucker the difference is definetly big Apex Predator Ultimate Ready Awaiting to Initiate Your too bitch made of a pussy to listen to what the critics say Listen guys this is the news so tune in to this and pay attention Im charging double the price because people dont ever fucking listen Dairy farm cows and ice cold milk bitch its delicious I gave that hoe a wound to sew up she say she superstitches So as soon as we remove them bittches from the equation GoKu just went beast mode wait i mean super sane again The power is draining so quickly it wont sustain with a chance Im just not a bitch ass pussy i know the power of sayin cant I got bandz but not thousands of dollars cause that would be fan Tastic out man me and the drastic measures that we execute and plan You a tough guy who you trying to prove shit to dog for real Cause im just trying to be obvious about how i really feal   Theres not a cloud in the sky but I still see all darkness Is it because im a shady individual sketchier than an artist Park it and wait for investigative remarks to come through You still think you the shit you can drop that duece numba 2 Cinder ella ill tell ya your dress is flamable as a mother fucker bro. Take her out where the trash goes it will lead to black holes Perfect. You want the rhymes tighter—more inner schemes, multisyllabics, alliteration, stacked cadences. Not just “boom bap,” but that late-night cipher energy where every syllable hits like a drum. Here’s the enhanced Suno 5 version—rhyme-rich, layered, still authentic, ready to drop straight into Suno’s custom lyrics field. --- dark east-coast boom bap; dusty vinyl percussion, ghosted snare swing, warm sub-bass and crackling low-end throb; minor Rhodes loops chopped through 12-bit grit; hypnotic head-nod tempo; analog hiss with cinematic tension build; layered vocal texture: gritty male lead with whispered doubles and delay tails; lyrical intensity rising from hopelessness to self-forged triumph; lo-fi rain ambience, occasional sample stabs and ghost-choir pads for weight; production arc: claustrophobic intro → lyrical storm surge → defiant, slow-burn climax; unquantized groove, human imperfection kept raw; ends on vinyl fade, bass heartbeat still pulsing; bleak yet victorious energy—an inner war turned resurrection score --- I been breathin’ in smoke and toxic decay, sippin’ shame like it’s whisky as the day fades away. Life whisperin’ threats through a floorboards’ creek I’m a ghost with a pen, but the paper is part of me Cold breath carve frost on a empty dangerous plane, I been prayin’ to the echoes that forgot my name. Bills pile like bodies, still the rhythm remain, my hunger got manners it built on pain. I spit venom laced in confession and creed, turnin’ concrete wounds to bars that scream Every setback a seminar, lesson in strain, I built discipline from the wreckage and rain. Silence loud as a sermon, I study the tone, found peace in the chaos when I made it my own They said collapse I translated collapse to climb, rewrote every “never” in the margin of time. Pressure sculpted my pulse into pattern and proof, I’m the roof and the roots and the reason for truth.  I fell through the floor, now I’m buildin’ a throne, turned my ruin to rhythm, pain to stone. Ain’t beggin’ for light, I’m spark of my own, the worst I been—where I sharpened my tone. Back when hunger hummed hymns in my hollow chest, I stitched dreams from the lint in the pockets of stress. Every “no” was a nail, but I framed my quest, now my flaws hold form like a bulletproof vest. See, I’m knee-deep in doubt but I treat it like clay, shape faith from the dirt, paint the night in gray. My rhyme schemes weave grief through a gospel of grit, each beat a confession the angels admit. Still broke but rich in the rhythm I earn, the world spins cold, but the vinyl turn. “keep breathin’, keep bleedin’ ink,” my pages drink the dark till it start to think. I’m the echo that argues with silence’s choir, every failure a spark, every scar rewired. What they call defeat, I rename design, alchemy of anguish, transform decline. [tag: lift]  “load the grief, release precision,” pain became art through a cracked transmission. From the ash I architect ammunition, fireproof faith, that’s my coalition. The gutter taught grace, now the struggle my crown, I’m the quiet before the storm that tear it all down. [tag: gun click] [Chorus][Energy: High][Mood: Triumphant] I fell through the floor, now I’m buildin’ a throne, turned my ruin to rhythm, pain to stone. Ain’t beggin’ for light, I’m spark of my own, the worst I been—where I sharpened my tone. [Outro][Drop][Fade Out][Texture: Warm Analog] (low vinyl hiss, bass heartbeat steady) Ashes whisper: “you forged this fire.” Now rise. Now rise. --- This version packs multisyllabic rhyme chains (“collapse to climb / margin of time,” “hunger hummed hymns / pockets of stress”), alliteration, internal echoes, and micro-cadence you can actually rap over. Drop it straight into Suno 5’s Custom Lyrics and the style field above—it’ll breathe with human imperfection and feel lived-in, not generated. i could do this all day or until i run outta beats  shit i could freestyle all week if i didnt have sleep on the edge of dying yyyy66b6y