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911 what’s the emergency/another homicide please come with some urgency/ I pray when you make it to the scene he won’t be gone/the grim reaper lurking around the corner so it won’t long/ he laying in the streets with tears in his eyes/ fighting not to die/ his moma asking why/too much jealousy and pride/ he could’ve let it slide/ but now he gotta take that ride/ to them pearly white gates/ shots to his chest sealed his fate/ where I’m from it’s just another day/it’s happening in every state/ didn’t even make it see 21/ 13 when he first picked up a gun/ironic he lost his life to one

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

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10 months ago

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