Patrick 🌹
What's a light to the sky, When there ain't no dark Fight for what's mine I'm gonna make my mark Follow God's design, Stay true to my heart. Lives intertwined, all doling their part Love and loss, it's pleasure and pain What's the cost, can you measure the rain? So do what's right, stand for something Fight the good fight, sacrifice nothing Build your castle, brick by brick, Earn that cash flow, but not too quick. Keep your integrity, guard your lips Cos words have tendencies to sink ships, destroy a legacy, life's a trip. Enjoy the ride, make an impact On someone's life, give something back And lose your pride, gotta stay humble. Don't ever hide, face that trouble. If there's a divide, between two groups, Pick a side, you have to choose Respect and honor, that's the code, Pray to our father, in case you go. If you find your queen, make her yours Follow your dreams, reach for the stars
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What's a light to the sky, When there ain't no dark Fight for what's mine I'm gonna make my mark Follow God's design, Stay true to my heart. Lives intertwined, all doling their part Love and loss, it's pleasure and pain What's the cost, can you measure the rain? So do what's right, stand for something Fight the good fight, sacrifice nothing Build your castle, brick by brick, Earn that cash flow, but not too quick. Keep your integrity, guard your lips Cos words have tendencies to sink ships, destroy a legacy, life's a trip. Enjoy the ride, make an impact On someone's life, give something back And lose your pride, gotta stay humble. Don't ever hide, face that trouble. If there's a divide, between two groups, Pick a side, you have to choose Respect and honor, that's the code, Pray to our father, in case you go. If you find your queen, make her yours Follow your dreams, reach for the stars
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