well you have my word that's all I got right ๐ฏ๐ฏ do you have my word the next songs that I do,,,, ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ช I promise you you got my word๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ ๐ ๐ฏ 99.9.9% guarantee you this could be one of the best songs you
I've always tried to be smart and handle things the right way and trust me it's not because I can't DefI just been having a lot of hard time with lost ones you know I've lost a lot of friends and a lot of family and my mom was the hardest one loose to lose and I don't even know if my dad's still alive but anyway so I'm like real emotional like I'm all over the place and but I noticed when I write if I'm upset and I'm a mad say whatever it is I try not to be mad because I can't control my temper walk away breathe walk away breathe when I get mad anyway long story short so I try to always I
I knew I was good at it but you know I was young and dumb anda job even though it's 40 something apartment apartmentyears ago so I thought I knew everything so I kicked myself out of my dad's apartment,,,, so the writing kind of fades
0 a jobJuly 16th ,,,,,,,, so I started writing poems in elementary school grade school and high school I got that high School cuz I was going through shock depression everything at once just started going to communic
๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ oh yeah I'm going to a really really really hard time right now bad bad breakup after 10 years it's just been one thing after another last 5 years so couple weeks ago and when the s*** hit the fan got really bad I'm like you know what I can't just sit here and stay at the wall I need to write so I started writing again and I wrote like six call eternityo s5 no problem cuz I don't have my headphones with me if that's okay they're at the house not all of them are done they just need to put be put in a song there's one
we need money to survive a how wasand you know it's not about the moand it'sI used to try to act like I was a rockstar when I was little kid it's not about money because money the love of dancingyou know what you're all awesome!!! ๐ฏ and you know what this is like a blessing dis
thank you,,,,I'm ready to take off n not look back,,,,, I've always wanted to be a performer,,great dancer also, songwriter,,poemwriter,,,,power of the pen!!!!
Hey @robertscott.14193566,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give you some tips on 'I got the Juice (02:53:26)'! ๐ฅ
1. Visuals are hella important when it comes to Rap! Record a video to show off your skills. ๐ผ
2. Sound quality is key when it comes to music! Make sure your track is the best quality you can achieve before posting your tracks!
3. Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. ๐ง
4. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time!
5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track!
6. Can you give us a bit more? This was too short for us to give you real feedback.
Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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well you have my word that's all I got right ๐ฏ๐ฏ do you have my word the next songs that I do,,,, ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ช I promise you you got my word๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ ๐ ๐ฏ 99.9.9% guarantee you this could be one of the best songs you
I've always tried to be smart and handle things the right way and trust me it's not because I can't DefI just been having a lot of hard time with lost ones you know I've lost a lot of friends and a lot of family and my mom was the hardest one loose to lose and I don't even know if my dad's still alive but anyway so I'm like real emotional like I'm all over the place and but I noticed when I write if I'm upset and I'm a mad say whatever it is I try not to be mad because I can't control my temper walk away breathe walk away breathe when I get mad anyway long story short so I try to always I
I knew I was good at it but you know I was young and dumb anda job even though it's 40 something apartment apartmentyears ago so I thought I knew everything so I kicked myself out of my dad's apartment,,,, so the writing kind of fades
0 a jobJuly 16th ,,,,,,,, so I started writing poems in elementary school grade school and high school I got that high School cuz I was going through shock depression everything at once just started going to communic
๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ oh yeah I'm going to a really really really hard time right now bad bad breakup after 10 years it's just been one thing after another last 5 years so couple weeks ago and when the s*** hit the fan got really bad I'm like you know what I can't just sit here and stay at the wall I need to write so I started writing again and I wrote like six call eternityo s5 no problem cuz I don't have my headphones with me if that's okay they're at the house not all of them are done they just need to put be put in a song there's one
we need money to survive a how wasand you know it's not about the moand it'sI used to try to act like I was a rockstar when I was little kid it's not about money because money the love of dancingyou know what you're all awesome!!! ๐ฏ and you know what this is like a blessing dis
thank you everyonet.y everyone!!! ๐ฏ are you all inspired me to keep on keeping on and don't ever give up
I don't have headphones right ow
thank you,,,,I'm ready to take off n not look back,,,,, I've always wanted to be a performer,,great dancer also, songwriter,,poemwriter,,,,power of the pen!!!!
Groovy vibes! Looking forward to your next release! ๐ต Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @robertscott.14193566, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give you some tips on 'I got the Juice (02:53:26)'! ๐ฅ 1. Visuals are hella important when it comes to Rap! Record a video to show off your skills. ๐ผ 2. Sound quality is key when it comes to music! Make sure your track is the best quality you can achieve before posting your tracks! 3. Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. ๐ง 4. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Can you give us a bit more? This was too short for us to give you real feedback. Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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