(Verse 1)
(Verse 1) I'm rising from the shadows, yeah, I’m hungry for the gold, Got my mind on the prize, watch the story unfold, Dark nights, cold fights, but I’m ready for the war, Got my heart on my sleeve, I’m just aiming for more. Counting every blessing while I’m dodging the hate, In the city where the dreams often meet with fate, Whispers in the alleys, but I’m louder than the noise, In the struggle for the crown, I’ma make 'em hear my voice. (Verse 2) Late nights in the booth, spitting fire with the pain, Every bar I lay down, yeah, it’s dripping like the rain, Watch me rise from the ashes, like a phoenix in the dark, With the heart of a lion, I’m igniting that spark. They wanna see me fall, but I’m built for the climb, Got my eyes on the throne, yeah, I’m taking my time, In the game for the fame, but it’s deeper than the charts, I’m a new rap star, with a vision in my heart.
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(Verse 1) I'm rising from the shadows, yeah, I’m hungry for the gold, Got my mind on the prize, watch the story unfold, Dark nights, cold fights, but I’m ready for the war, Got my heart on my sleeve, I’m just aiming for more. Counting every blessing while I’m dodging the hate, In the city where the dreams often meet with fate, Whispers in the alleys, but I’m louder than the noise, In the struggle for the crown, I’ma make 'em hear my voice. (Verse 2) Late nights in the booth, spitting fire with the pain, Every bar I lay down, yeah, it’s dripping like the rain, Watch me rise from the ashes, like a phoenix in the dark, With the heart of a lion, I’m igniting that spark. They wanna see me fall, but I’m built for the climb, Got my eyes on the throne, yeah, I’m taking my time, In the game for the fame, but it’s deeper than the charts, I’m a new rap star, with a vision in my heart.
Hi @znxhe9adrd! Here's a couple tips for your track '(Verse 1) '! 💥 1. Spend some time on your vocal levels - it's important to find a balance between the beat and your bars! 2. Once you find a good recording set up, stick with it! Rapping is all about consistency, try and apply this to every level of your music! 3. Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 4. We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! 5. Get immediate feedback on your track with Judge 4 Judge! You and another user simultaneously provide feedback for each other's track, helping you to level up on your next drop! 💥 Submit more for feedback from us and community to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Track's ill, just needs that extra dose to hit the next level! 🤒
keep grinding fam you will be great fam 💯