For Rob
This is my first ever song, I wrote it about my bestfriend who died. Lately I been over-smoking, Worked so hard, lost it all, now I'm hurt and broken. Took the other path, now they're poppin' pills and choking, It's 3am, I'm lost, swerving, drunk, and hopeless. Homie popped a pill behind the wheel, now my heart is broken, can't you hear I'd talk you out of overdosing. Think about you every day, Lately I been over-smoking, just to keep the pain away. Remember when we used to chill, laughing 'til the night was gone Now those memories haunt me, can't believe that you're gone see your face in every crowd, hear your voice in every song, Wish I could turn back, fix everything that went wrong. Driving past our old spots, where we used to hang, Now they're just reminders, of the hurt and the pain. I know you're up there watching, hope you see my struggle, Trying to find my way, but I'm just finding trouble Cause lately I been over-smoking, Worked so hard, lost it all, now I'm hurt and broken. Took the other path, now they're poppin' pills and choking, It's 3am, I'm lost, swerving, drunk, and hopeless. Homie popped a pill behind the wheel, now my heart is broken, If you were here, I'd talk you out of overdosing. Think about you every day, Cause lately I been over-smoking, just to keep the pain away. Wish I could hear your laugh, see you smile once more All I have are memories, and they me cut to the core Trying to stay strong, but itβs hard without you here, Every puff of smoke, every tear, im in fear, so dear Rob, I wrote this song for you to hear. J Cole x Russ type beat
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This is my first ever song, I wrote it about my bestfriend who died. Lately I been over-smoking, Worked so hard, lost it all, now I'm hurt and broken. Took the other path, now they're poppin' pills and choking, It's 3am, I'm lost, swerving, drunk, and hopeless. Homie popped a pill behind the wheel, now my heart is broken, can't you hear I'd talk you out of overdosing. Think about you every day, Lately I been over-smoking, just to keep the pain away. Remember when we used to chill, laughing 'til the night was gone Now those memories haunt me, can't believe that you're gone see your face in every crowd, hear your voice in every song, Wish I could turn back, fix everything that went wrong. Driving past our old spots, where we used to hang, Now they're just reminders, of the hurt and the pain. I know you're up there watching, hope you see my struggle, Trying to find my way, but I'm just finding trouble Cause lately I been over-smoking, Worked so hard, lost it all, now I'm hurt and broken. Took the other path, now they're poppin' pills and choking, It's 3am, I'm lost, swerving, drunk, and hopeless. Homie popped a pill behind the wheel, now my heart is broken, If you were here, I'd talk you out of overdosing. Think about you every day, Cause lately I been over-smoking, just to keep the pain away. Wish I could hear your laugh, see you smile once more All I have are memories, and they me cut to the core Trying to stay strong, but itβs hard without you here, Every puff of smoke, every tear, im in fear, so dear Rob, I wrote this song for you to hear. J Cole x Russ type beat
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