killing of yours dreams
Here's an updated version of the rap, incorporating your suggestion: "Coffs Harbor, a killer of dreams / Young people hoping to rise like cream / But you gotta leave this bubble, it's a trap / Nothing good left here, except nature's map / Beaches and rainforests, freshwater and salt / Good people judged, discrimination, they ought not / Homelessness struggles, bad streets and names / Skatepark, Woolworths, knives and DVOs, these games / Cars and kids, boredom and crave / Fast cars, women, this town's like a wave / Unsolved murders, mysteries untold / Coffs Harbor's history, nobody knows / Elders few, black or white, who cares? / Jealousy reigns, that's what scares / Good people move forward, others stuck in plight / Coffs Harbor, a town of the night / Meth thrives, the drug scene's alive / It's a trap, a killer of dreams and drive."
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Here's an updated version of the rap, incorporating your suggestion: "Coffs Harbor, a killer of dreams / Young people hoping to rise like cream / But you gotta leave this bubble, it's a trap / Nothing good left here, except nature's map / Beaches and rainforests, freshwater and salt / Good people judged, discrimination, they ought not / Homelessness struggles, bad streets and names / Skatepark, Woolworths, knives and DVOs, these games / Cars and kids, boredom and crave / Fast cars, women, this town's like a wave / Unsolved murders, mysteries untold / Coffs Harbor's history, nobody knows / Elders few, black or white, who cares? / Jealousy reigns, that's what scares / Good people move forward, others stuck in plight / Coffs Harbor, a town of the night / Meth thrives, the drug scene's alive / It's a trap, a killer of dreams and drive."
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