Haze
(Verse 1) Mmmm mmmm mmmm, I be feeling trapped, Lost in my mind, like a dream I can’t map, Stars in my eyes, but they fade like a ghost, Floating in the clouds, but I’m missing you the most. Got my heart in a cage, but I’m reaching for the light, Every step that I take, got me feeling so right, Touch the sky, but the ground pulls me back, Every time that I rise, I just feel that I lack. (Verse 2) Memories haunt me, like shadows in the night, Chasing down the dreams, but they vanish out of sight, I’m lost in a world where the colors all blend, Searching for a way, but it feels like the end. Mmmm mmmm mmmm, but I still hold tight, Hope in my heart, yeah, I’m ready for the fight, In this dreamy haze, where the pain starts to fade, I’ll keep reaching for you but I know you’ll always fade
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(Verse 1) Mmmm mmmm mmmm, I be feeling trapped, Lost in my mind, like a dream I can’t map, Stars in my eyes, but they fade like a ghost, Floating in the clouds, but I’m missing you the most. Got my heart in a cage, but I’m reaching for the light, Every step that I take, got me feeling so right, Touch the sky, but the ground pulls me back, Every time that I rise, I just feel that I lack. (Verse 2) Memories haunt me, like shadows in the night, Chasing down the dreams, but they vanish out of sight, I’m lost in a world where the colors all blend, Searching for a way, but it feels like the end. Mmmm mmmm mmmm, but I still hold tight, Hope in my heart, yeah, I’m ready for the fight, In this dreamy haze, where the pain starts to fade, I’ll keep reaching for you but I know you’ll always fade
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Now that's what we're talking about @robert.12894794, Nice job on your first track 'Haze'! 1. Don't worry if you didn't get it first time, you can always re-record your bars! 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! 🎇 3. We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! 4. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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