(Verse 1)
(Verse 1) Late nights, city lights, heart heavy like a stone, Frustration in my veins, got me feelin' all alone, Love's a double-edged sword, cut deeper than the grind, Hustlin' through the pain, but it’s messin’ with my mind. Dreams stacked high, but the pressure weighs me down, Emotions spillin’ over, drownin’ in this dirty town, Got a vision in my soul, but it's clouded by the doubt, Every step I take, man, I’m tryin’ to break out. (Verse 2) Late calls, empty halls, where you at, where you been? Heartbreak in the hustle, but I’m still tryin’ to win, Love’s a battlefield, scars hidden in my chest, Fightin’ demons daily, man, I’m never gettin’ rest. Grinding for the fam, but the nights just feel so cold, Chasin’ dreams of gold, while the story’s still untold, Frustrations in the air, like a storm that won’t subside, But through the struggle, I rise, with my heart open wide.
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(Verse 1) Late nights, city lights, heart heavy like a stone, Frustration in my veins, got me feelin' all alone, Love's a double-edged sword, cut deeper than the grind, Hustlin' through the pain, but it’s messin’ with my mind. Dreams stacked high, but the pressure weighs me down, Emotions spillin’ over, drownin’ in this dirty town, Got a vision in my soul, but it's clouded by the doubt, Every step I take, man, I’m tryin’ to break out. (Verse 2) Late calls, empty halls, where you at, where you been? Heartbreak in the hustle, but I’m still tryin’ to win, Love’s a battlefield, scars hidden in my chest, Fightin’ demons daily, man, I’m never gettin’ rest. Grinding for the fam, but the nights just feel so cold, Chasin’ dreams of gold, while the story’s still untold, Frustrations in the air, like a storm that won’t subside, But through the struggle, I rise, with my heart open wide.
keep grinding you got potential for reall
good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding 💪 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
that's my gang u got talent keep putting em down
Thank you for all the comments and judges, any n all positive criticism is welcome. Any suggestions on beats i should try out are definitely welcome as well 🙂 Mad appreciation to y'all.
Yo feeling DAT 4 real fam gotta go make me a few tracks Holla at ya fam. 🃏💯💯
Crazy Bro, This one you should have extended the best for more flow this one's not even over just getting started with the first verse! Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Energy off the charts, this vibe's contagious and bussin! 🌊
Respect 🤜🤛 Keep grinding ✊ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Incredible flow, your rhymes are straight flames🔥no cap! 🎤💥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯