v1
(Verse 1) Lost my brother, now I’m trapped in this zone, Walls closing in, feelin' heavy like stone. Used to laugh, now it’s silence in the air, Memories haunt me, like shadows everywhere. (Verse 2) Used to ride together, now I’m solo on this path, Echoes of your voice, man, it cuts like a knife. Thought we’d conquer the world, but now it’s just me, Walls built up high, can’t escape this debris. (Verse 3) Days feel darker, I’m searchin’ for a sign, Every corner I turn, it’s like I’m runnin’ blind. Thought I’d break free, but the chains pull tight, Trapped in this cage, man, I’m fightin’ the night. (Verse 4) Heart heavy with loss, wearin’ scars like a badge, Tryna find a way out, but it feels like a mirage. I’m reachin’ for the light, but the walls just confine, Lost my friend, now I’m lost in my mind.
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Yo @flamelucero! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'v1'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Use multiple vocal tracks to add some extra power to your flows. 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Can you give us a bit more? This was too short for us to give you real feedback. 7. Get immediate feedback on your track with Judge 4 Judge! You and another user simultaneously provide feedback for each other's track, helping you to level up on your next drop! 💥 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎