I take a look

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I take a look

verse 1....i take a look at my life asking god for the reasons y i lose myself.. just give me this one simple confession y i have all of this crippling depression ,fits of rage n hate it just to much to fucking take... verse2... all the light grows dimmer im standing there wishing that i could just remember what happiness feels like that comes from inside.. chorus... i take a look a my life asking god for all the reasons y is this truly my life fighting every single demon disguised or thats in plane sight enhancing everyone of struggle and strife verse3.. im standing just staring at the mirror just wishing for a lil help to numb tha pain thats killing me from deep inside that i always make sure i try to hide but u see right through these tried eyes that fight n fight through sleepless nights... verse4..i keep praying that it will get better but that always seem like it will never im tired of going through constant stormy weather im weighted down by all my thoughts it hurts so much please oh please just make um stop verse5....baby u say ur just under as much pressure but u wouldn't be able to measure i swear to god i feels like its changing the barametic pressure chorus...i take a look at my life asking god how have iv made it has all my time been wasted dear god please tell me the reasons y that im still here alive i dont think i can take this i have no more fuckin patience outro...take a look at my life understand its not basic there always gonna be some mistakes n bullshit so when i lay down tonight and i close my eyes u can take my life dear god please im just so damn tired

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2 years ago

verse 1....i take a look at my life asking god for the reasons y i lose myself.. just give me this one simple confession y i have all of this crippling depression ,fits of rage n hate it just to much to fucking take... verse2... all the light grows dimmer im standing there wishing that i could just remember what happiness feels like that comes from inside.. chorus... i take a look a my life asking god for all the reasons y is this truly my life fighting every single demon disguised or thats in plane sight enhancing everyone of struggle and strife verse3.. im standing just staring at the mirror just wishing for a lil help to numb tha pain thats killing me from deep inside that i always make sure i try to hide but u see right through these tried eyes that fight n fight through sleepless nights... verse4..i keep praying that it will get better but that always seem like it will never im tired of going through constant stormy weather im weighted down by all my thoughts it hurts so much please oh please just make um stop verse5....baby u say ur just under as much pressure but u wouldn't be able to measure i swear to god i feels like its changing the barametic pressure chorus...i take a look at my life asking god how have iv made it has all my time been wasted dear god please tell me the reasons y that im still here alive i dont think i can take this i have no more fuckin patience outro...take a look at my life understand its not basic there always gonna be some mistakes n bullshit so when i lay down tonight and i close my eyes u can take my life dear god please im just so damn tired

2 years ago

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2 years ago

Hey @rileycurtis! Thanks for sharing 'I take a look' with us! 💥 Here are a couple tips: 1. Try recording a freestyle vid next! Here you can really show the rest of the app your true passion for rap! 2. Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great! 3. Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. Defo try out our denoise feature to minimize any background noise on your track! 🤫 6. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎

3 months ago

Bro, you crushed it! Delivering heat as always! 🔥

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