it’s your turn to shine
Verse 1: I can't believe what you did, you crossed the line Putting my dad in jail, now it's time to shine I'll make you pay for all the pain you caused You thought you were slick, but now you're lost You thought you could get away with your crime But now it's my turn to shine I'll show you what happens when you mess with me I'll make sure you never walk free Verse 2: You think you're tough, but you're just a coward Putting my dad in jail, you think you have power But I'll make sure you regret what you've done I'll make you pay for all the damage you've spun You thought you could get away with your lies But now it's time for you to realize That I won't rest until justice is served I'll make sure you get what you deserve.
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Verse 1: I can't believe what you did, you crossed the line Putting my dad in jail, now it's time to shine I'll make you pay for all the pain you caused You thought you were slick, but now you're lost You thought you could get away with your crime But now it's my turn to shine I'll show you what happens when you mess with me I'll make sure you never walk free Verse 2: You think you're tough, but you're just a coward Putting my dad in jail, you think you have power But I'll make sure you regret what you've done I'll make you pay for all the damage you've spun You thought you could get away with your lies But now it's time for you to realize That I won't rest until justice is served I'll make sure you get what you deserve.
You've got that swagger, own it in every verse! 😎🔥 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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I'm feeling this ❤️ Amazing 💎 Bussin 💥 Slidddd 🌊 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Legend! 👑