life sucks
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•2 months ago
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Your talent is shining through on this track! 🌟 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @change.10595619! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'life sucks '! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Try and test out the distance between you and the mic before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ 3. Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 4. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. 5. The track is just a little short for us to give our full thoughts, try submitting something a bit more complete. 6. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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