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i see you all the time your always on my mind cant stop fellin numb from these thoughts life is raw brung me down made my smile a frown laying on the ground sad and depressed wonderin whats next will i die alone sad or why my life like that feelin down 3 lines on me now will i ever feel right will my life cant seem to find the light darkest times 3 lines down on my wrist mom came in why the slits it wasnt you it was her made me feel like i wasnt worth but i am you are too dont ever feel like a loser try to the top mabye youll flop dont get down made it now

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2 years ago

O.D.O. Wanny

2 years ago

You've got serious potential, don't stop! 🌟 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

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2 years ago

Wassup @rydersnead, Thank you for sharing 'number 1' with our community 💥. Here are a few words to the wise from us: 1. Recording quality matters fam! Make sure you don't let your excitement cloud your judgement! Release your tracks when they ready! 🤟 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 5. Get immediate feedback on your track with Judge 4 Judge! You and another user simultaneously provide feedback for each other's track, helping you to level up on your next drop! 💥 We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎