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No matter how hard it may seems, don’t give up on yourselves… remember mom and dad are still waiting… we are all struggling and hustling to live a good lives for ourselves and families, in the process righteous comes in, when you all have finally achieved your dreams please don’t forget the kingdom of GOD… I believe we will all make it there
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No matter how hard it may seems, don’t give up on yourselves… remember mom and dad are still waiting… we are all struggling and hustling to live a good lives for ourselves and families, in the process righteous comes in, when you all have finally achieved your dreams please don’t forget the kingdom of GOD… I believe we will all make it there
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let's both do a Collab bout the church BLESSED 🙏 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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good energy fr fr when you record turn your recorder volume down then after singing your writtens and stopping the recording track to back to the volume settings to adjust to a good volume it will eliminate the hot mic problem you are having and make your songs a little better production wise considering that's your only problem you will make hits if you do this... Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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