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Verse 1: I thought that we were meant to be, But love was never meant for me, I'm brokenhearted and so lost, I never thought it would end up this way. Chorus: One minute you were mine, The next, you were saying goodbye, I'm living a heartbreak story, And it's so hard to move on. Verse 2: I'm searching for a way to start, But I'm just so broken apart, I don't think I can mend my heart, Cause love broke my world apart. Chorus: One minute you were mine, The next, you were saying goodbye, I'm living a heartbreak story, And it's so hard to move on. Bridge: If I could go back in time, I'd try to make it alright, I miss your love and the magic, But love was just too blind to see. Chorus: One minute you were mine, The next, you were saying goodbye, I'm living a heartbreak story, And it's so hard to move on.
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Verse 1: I thought that we were meant to be, But love was never meant for me, I'm brokenhearted and so lost, I never thought it would end up this way. Chorus: One minute you were mine, The next, you were saying goodbye, I'm living a heartbreak story, And it's so hard to move on. Verse 2: I'm searching for a way to start, But I'm just so broken apart, I don't think I can mend my heart, Cause love broke my world apart. Chorus: One minute you were mine, The next, you were saying goodbye, I'm living a heartbreak story, And it's so hard to move on. Bridge: If I could go back in time, I'd try to make it alright, I miss your love and the magic, But love was just too blind to see. Chorus: One minute you were mine, The next, you were saying goodbye, I'm living a heartbreak story, And it's so hard to move on.
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