on the top

Name: on the top
Description: I’m coming off the tape you know what I’m bout to to say I just took yo girl on a date today ( a date) on this beat it’s a beautiful day if you know what I say u can not play Ima master mind in the hands of my eyes don’t look at me or u will sue I’m on the top look at the rock with my opps I just seen my pops yea we out

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I’m coming off the tape you know what I’m bout to to say I just took yo girl on a date today ( a date) on this beat it’s a beautiful day if you know what I say u can not play Ima master mind in the hands of my eyes don’t look at me or u will sue I’m on the top look at the rock with my opps I just seen my pops yea we out

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Dj Allen

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3 years ago

Cornelius Brown

3 years ago

hey man keep grinding you have potential I guarentee you will evolve as a artist dope track

DJ.LoyalT$86

3 years ago

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Eric Evans

3 years ago

........real nice flow on fire 🔥💯 1000

big_murda

3 years ago

Dawg how old is you but it’s still good gang Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @djallen.9282147! Here's a couple tips for your track 'on the top'! 💥 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! 🎇 3. Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 4. Try mixing up different light studio effects on your vocals to give your track the perfect sound every time. 🎤 5. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎

Cairo Snow FPTO (Supreme Cai)

20 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Leavem petrified

4 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

[YouTube]Bobby Barzzz

7 months ago

WAKE EM UP 🗣️🔊 I feel it! 🤜🤛 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

TrenchBoy J

9 months ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥