breathe

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breathe

Don’t spread love An’ got a higher consequence It would go so high You won’t have any confidence So just let the Sky fall down like confetti On all the bad in your life Sorry that I’m very sketchy Your just very edgy Yah all this bad in your life Ohm yah yah yah ohm hi hi Wouldn’t be anything to all this strife

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3 years ago

Don’t spread love An’ got a higher consequence It would go so high You won’t have any confidence So just let the Sky fall down like confetti On all the bad in your life Sorry that I’m very sketchy Your just very edgy Yah all this bad in your life Ohm yah yah yah ohm hi hi Wouldn’t be anything to all this strife

3 years ago

hi my friend welcome to rap frame and your son is not bad keep going🍿🎤💥

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3 years ago

Bro this is fire although I can’t really hear it and it’s really short, good job.

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the beat is so mellow al.ost as if your trying to build up to the break or you'll be doing meditation. I would keep at it every time you try you learn and know that much more. keep up the good work.

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3 years ago

Now that's what we're talking about @laylaytheledgendary, Nice job on your first track 'breathe'! 1. Use multiple vocal tracks to add some extra power to your flows. 2. Sound quality is key when it comes to music! Make sure your track is the best quality you can achieve before posting your tracks! 3. Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! 6. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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