GLORY: COVETEOUSNESS

De-R

Author

3 years ago

IVE SEEN THE SAME THANG WE BOTH FROM THE SAME HOOD BUT ALL HE WANT TO DO IS BANG HAD A PRAYING MOMMA BUT THAT BROTHER STAYED THE SAME GLORIFIED THAT LIFESTYLE HE COULDNT GET IT IN HIS BRAIN THERES ONLY ONE WAY THIS CAN GO AND ITS ALL PAIN WHILE I JUST FOCUSED ON GOD CAUSE IM JUST TRYING TO MAINTAIN HE QUICKLY CUT ME OFF NOW HE DONT REMEMBER MY NAME I GUESS THAT READING IN MY BIBLE TO HIM WAS JUST SO LAME QUICKLY FAST FORWARD IM KEEPING A STEADY PACE PICKUP GAME ON THE COURT HEARD THAT BROTHER CAUGHT A CASE A CLOSE FRIEND MAN AND ITS ANOTHER SAD STORY HE EXALTED THUG LIFE CAUSE HE WANTED ALL THE GLORY! ITS JUST THAT SAME SAD STORY WHEN PEOPLE SELL THEY vSOUL AND THEY COVET ALL THE GLORY

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @demyiloray! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'GLORY: COVETEOUSNESS'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Use multiple vocal tracks to add some extra power to your flows. 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! 4. This was a nice taste, but we're gonna need a longer track if you want us to give you detailed feedback! 5. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lil Noflo

3 years ago

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