that's better man. just take your time and let it develop. your flow was better. your structure was better. just gotta not try to squeeze words in, remember less words that mean the same things or are better quality words help.
like, instead of saying " I am so happy" say "I'm chill", you get me? Thesaurus is a good friend. and Syllables. rhyme Syllables as well not just words.
this is 85% better than your first shot and it was terrible bro.
keep making tracks like this. you'll get better and better.
if you want it. you gotta pull it out of you
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that's better man. just take your time and let it develop. your flow was better. your structure was better. just gotta not try to squeeze words in, remember less words that mean the same things or are better quality words help. like, instead of saying " I am so happy" say "I'm chill", you get me? Thesaurus is a good friend. and Syllables. rhyme Syllables as well not just words. this is 85% better than your first shot and it was terrible bro. keep making tracks like this. you'll get better and better. if you want it. you gotta pull it out of you