upside down rail
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Hes fat like a rat that A had gap and a crap cap that was not very slak and was fat as a truck and had no luck he acted like a duck that said cluck cluck I pulled the rug like ugh ur a slug My birthday is 27 july he thinks he can fly like guy you cant fly in the sky go cry yor eyes out i Know u can die like why guys gonna Die Im out lil luca β
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Hes fat like a rat that A had gap and a crap cap that was not very slak and was fat as a truck and had no luck he acted like a duck that said cluck cluck I pulled the rug like ugh ur a slug My birthday is 27 july he thinks he can fly like guy you cant fly in the sky go cry yor eyes out i Know u can die like why guys gonna Die Im out lil luca β
could been slightly clearer Bars: Can improve π Delivery: Can improve π Impression: Can improve π
Luca this is a banger King π listen to my first song and follow bro π€
sounds pretty good... keep working...βπΎ
Yo @lilluca.8536656! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'upside down rail'! π₯ Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Try trimming your audio clips in the Studio to remove unwanted sounds! 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π 3. If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. 4. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 5. Sorry yo, we need you to share a longer track then we can give you some feedback! 6. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! πΈ Keep uploading tracks for the chance to be added to our editors Playlists! π₯ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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