My heart is broken

Maphila

Author

3 years ago

Yo yo uhm My heart is broken She left me forever He took my money and everything i own She took my kids she everything I have no one and even my parents left me I have no one else in my life So im dead Peace!!

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Now that's what we're talking about @maphila.8311639, Nice job on your first track 'My heart is broken '! 1. Letting the beat dictate your flow is a simple way to sound smooth. 🌊 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 5. The track is just a little short for us to give our full thoughts, try submitting something a bit more complete. 6. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests 🏆 Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme! Submit more for feedback from us and community to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎