your lyrics are great your bars are great your delivery is great the impression is you know I'm very impressed and I do like your lyrics and your message and I just think you need to work on raising your tone a bit or lower in the trouble of your beat but other than that use 100% And that comes from a white niggah that's been doing this for years I like your personality too I like when I hear you laugh and smile in the towards the end of your track it's really cute it helps out as some points to you know what I think of you and your song and maybe want to investigate a little more see what other tracks you might have maybe we can do a collab damn I did in another comment to
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your lyrics are great your bars are great your delivery is great the impression is you know I'm very impressed and I do like your lyrics and your message and I just think you need to work on raising your tone a bit or lower in the trouble of your beat but other than that use 100% And that comes from a white niggah that's been doing this for years I like your personality too I like when I hear you laugh and smile in the towards the end of your track it's really cute it helps out as some points to you know what I think of you and your song and maybe want to investigate a little more see what other tracks you might have maybe we can do a collab damn I did in another comment to
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