Treadin the Line

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I'm treadin the line of my pathetic life got one thing on my mind and it's suicide But no one will care if I disappear catch a glimpse of me all cuz life's not fair Work a 9-5 just to make ends meet to survive labors not free No no labors high cut my days no reason why I'm just a number so no reason to try get mad oh well pass me by Bitch I work for what a couple dollars more, you use me like a tool for ur underestablished store You can say you got it you can complain but I try harder than anybody in all of my days I will give my all I'll get it done but I'm underappreciated on daily run Use me abuse me I'm on a fuse dealing with assholes at work who have an "attitude" an attitude? Is that work appropriate? no got a lot on my plate

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KingMartini

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4 years ago

ShizzaShark Entertainment

3 months ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @liledndnndn, We listened to your track 'Treadin the Line', here's our report! 📝 Track Artwork ✅ Track Length ⭐️ Title ✅ Description ✅ Bars ✅ Cadence/Flow ✅ Delivery ✅ Vibe ✅ Concept ✅ Trending ⭐️ Recording quality ✅ Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎 ⭐ - Feature Worthy ✅ - Good Start 🛠 - Needs Improvement

Charles Guine

4 years ago

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Just-In

4 years ago

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Illa Tilla

4 years ago

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G.T.P.I.

4 years ago

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{GB}Plarks Fumbles

4 years ago

Shit brother this made me sad & worried my G. Hate to do it but for real are you OK? my friend? Suicide is hectic I lost so many people to Suicide including my step father who was a beautiful soul. I know we are on a Rap App/Forum but want to send some positive energy uour way fam. Massive blessings 🙌. Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Yung Weph

4 years ago

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LilTrueSlim

4 years ago

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God Big 7

4 years ago

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😡Bad Attitude😡 A.J. White

4 years ago

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