astronaut in the Ocean

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astronaut in the Ocean
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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you did a great job keep up the great work

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Tempo needs a bit of work. Creative title though. Just something extra, maybe use pictures you take instead default ones to make the song look more recognizable. Not a big deal tho

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4 years ago

Yo @i1rlahwwas! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'astronaut in the Ocean'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Keep learning from the legends and have one eye on the lyrics to get a feel for that flow! 👀 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. 4. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! 5. We have plenty of masterclasses to choose from, with different difficulties! Try another one to keep levelling up them rap skills. 💯 Submit more for feedback from us and community to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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