work on your pronunciation and your vocal loudness I can't hear you bro but I can't understand you either got a good . on the positive side your cadence was on point . and I can tell that you are definitely musically inclined this was just one of your worst attracts probably but I still respect you cuz you really got to put it out there cuz nobody's going to have hot songs every time but nobody understands that. unless you're a fan of the music and are creating the music and the sportsmanship of creating the music. keep your head up bro keep pushing
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work on your pronunciation and your vocal loudness I can't hear you bro but I can't understand you either got a good . on the positive side your cadence was on point . and I can tell that you are definitely musically inclined this was just one of your worst attracts probably but I still respect you cuz you really got to put it out there cuz nobody's going to have hot songs every time but nobody understands that. unless you're a fan of the music and are creating the music and the sportsmanship of creating the music. keep your head up bro keep pushing Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏