You’re doing more so of a California style wrap and the delivery is not there at all it’s a pretty good beat I I really like it but it’s just not there and you need to really worry more about your delivery because you’re just talking you’re not rapping you’re not singing you’re not doing anything but talking ..
Bars: Can improve 👏
Delivery: Can improve 👏
Impression: Can improve 👏
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I was on some lil Wayne type flow fam mixed with big Sean lol preciate the constructive criticism fr fr 🙏
You’re doing more so of a California style wrap and the delivery is not there at all it’s a pretty good beat I I really like it but it’s just not there and you need to really worry more about your delivery because you’re just talking you’re not rapping you’re not singing you’re not doing anything but talking .. Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
ffhg Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Nice 🌟