Astronomicalz
0:00
0:00
I'm walking home I see house that has a dome I walk inside I see a man I try to hide I say to myself oh no what do I do I make a plan I see a van outside I decide to hide again this is where I met the man he looked scary he looked hairy he looked like a cherry I tell him merry Christmas old man he ran inside and brought his pan prolly gunna hit me I don't know this rap is shit its only my third one somehow it occurred and I got blurred but prefer not to be DMed its not very nice ⁰0 hewed its not very nice not gonna deal with strangers twice I'm done yea ya
You may also like
Leave a comment
I'm walking home I see house that has a dome I walk inside I see a man I try to hide I say to myself oh no what do I do I make a plan I see a van outside I decide to hide again this is where I met the man he looked scary he looked hairy he looked like a cherry I tell him merry Christmas old man he ran inside and brought his pan prolly gunna hit me I don't know this rap is shit its only my third one somehow it occurred and I got blurred but prefer not to be DMed its not very nice ⁰0 hewed its not very nice not gonna deal with strangers twice I'm done yea ya
try to use a little bit more raw emotions and speak what you feel and put emotions into what she's saying and try to make sense of what you saying
but keep on doing yo thang
😁🍄 Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏
stop Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏
*you saying*