November story

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Lù mànmàn qí xiū yuǎn xī, xīnláo zhōng yǒu huíbào. 10 Nián fēng fēngyǔ yù guòqùle, wǒ shì cóng yīgè fēicháng jiānqiáng de mǔqīn dúlì chūshēng de. Wǒ bù kěnéng jīnglì de shìqíng wǒ yě kěyǐ jīnglì. Wǒ de chénggōng bùshì yīn wéi rénmen lìjí shēnghuó de shèjiāo pāndēng, ér shì yīnwèi wǒ de suǒzuò suǒ wéi, méiyǒu duōshǎo rén yīn wéi chénggōng ér xǐhuān wǒ, yīn wéi bù hélǐ de pànduàn hé guāndiǎn, qítā rén xiǎng yào ràng wǒ shīwàng. Shēnghuó shì gòu cánkù de, wú gǔ de shétou biānzàole suǒyǒu de shìjiàn, yǐ zhìyú suǒyǒu de zhēnlǐ zhī kǒu dōu bèi chénmòle. Tā méiyǒu rènhé yíhàn. Wǒ zhǐ néng qídǎo yīqiè dōu dédào jiějué. Kāiqǐ gèng měihǎo wèilái de xīn piānzhāng.

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