fabulous fs
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once upon a time back on my grind. got my camoflauge on im hard to find. press rewind if u need to find me in a different time.
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once upon a time back on my grind. got my camoflauge on im hard to find. press rewind if u need to find me in a different time.
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What's up @daledaniels, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'fabulous fs'! π₯ "Got my camouflage and I'm hard to find, just rewind if you need to find me in a different time" Love how your rhymes and punchlines right here, you're righting is clearly dope. But your vocals are really buried in that mix, try turning them up next time! Your delivery is super clean, you're floating over this banger of a beat and it's starting to sound dope. πΆ This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! βπ₯ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! π - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π― Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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