Freestyle#2 roughest draft

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Freestyle#2 roughest draft

10 hoes homie I got twin hoes, 10 a' those, go to 10 shows, went home to play Nintendo, Switch, what, then smoke a couple double bowls, slang a bunch of dammn poles at the fishing hole, fishing for a fishy that be down to blow. The Cities always gungry for that fish food, starve for they gonna go to my dude. So what if that shit do sound rude. Shit I ain't the one eatin nasty fuckin fish food. Pick up my game shit ain't the same but only a am to blame. I think away from the blame to blast past the lame life blame game as we all claim to aim for the same fame. So addicted to these hoes like you ain't even know. Better watch what you show cause you probly gonna reap what you sow. But hey my mama can sow so let me rip off yo clothes, looking damn fine from yo head to yo toe. Lemme take you to the back and you can give me a show. shit if it was between the women or the money I'd spit on these hoes . This shit over here on some real real shit so come over to the trap and fall into the trap that is these poles.-------Flipped a boat of bars so i could make it back to the flow, and what i still lacks is a bunch of damn stacks. Racking them packs and sacking them packs anybody touch it, in the back i got my trusty gat gat gat. Fuck that. I also got a 9mm, but the other dude do to. A 9mm Peter that his boyfriend sucks ew. Shit is off the chain straight obsurd all I want is to be gingerly heard, I don't want to be seen as the dude thats an outsiduur. But I really wasn't bred to be in this herd. Doesn't mean yall can't let me be part of the team. First things first know one person's greed will tear the team at the seam. For my team to sling the greatest sling ever made is my dream. My dreams go far and my goals go large. Only way they won't work out is if i catch a charge cause they see that I'm the one behind the bars. Even tho I'm already behind the bars as far as I can see I'm deemed to reign Supreme cause ny dreams only consist of coming up with tha team. R039 damn chick is devine b707 line and dine at 11. So S903 could be talkin to me Do whatever you please just don't take those 3. Used to be a dirty liar now I'm an uncertified certifier. Fuck with me and I'm bound to set your crib on fire. Maybe not me but I'll send the one I hired. Finding new reliable employees, this time they aint never gonna have to fuckin freeze. Gonna make enough flow for the whole team to know that they ain't no more worry bout being broke. We gonna have all the 1k boats and 24k hoes aka fish and fish food loads. Won't stop till we reign over this show and have all tha money, drugs, and hoes. Goes the same for all of my bros cause bros before hoes and bros before hoes is the only way the system holds

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

Hey @theonebehindthabars, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Freestyle#2 roughest draft'! πŸ’₯ "Pick up my game, sh*t ain't the same but only I am to blame" - rate your flow in this section. The recording quality here is really low! It would help you 10X over if you were able to improve this! There's a ton of distortion on the vocal at the moment! Try switching up your flows, this can give you a fresh perspective on your music & can really change the momentum of your song! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎀 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! πŸ’― It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! πŸ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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4 years ago

this my first shit I've ever done

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4 years ago

do I have to rerecord

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4 years ago

how do I raise the vocals

Raise the vocals but the bars a dope the way u came in Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Great πŸŽ‰ Impression: Great πŸŽ‰

4 years ago

Bro this is cool but vocal ain't loud enough πŸ‘ŠπŸ”₯

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

4 years ago

bonjour je vous souhaite une bonne chance pour la suite

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4 years ago

Hey @jamisongarrett, We appreciate you sharing 'Freestyle#2 roughest draft' with us! πŸ’₯ 1. This was a good start! Feel like once you get a decent amount of practice in you'll be droppin' bangers left and right! 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects πŸš€ Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! Try using J4J to see what others think of your tracks! πŸ’ͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

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Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Great πŸŽ‰ Impression: Great πŸŽ‰

Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect πŸ’― Delivery: Perfect πŸ’― Impression: Perfect πŸ’―

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