Yo @limtricklethemischievous!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Demon 4'! π₯
"Bad and boujee that's how I be acting" π―We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Fast flows π¨ But make sure it fits the beat, sometimes you fit too much in for the bar!
Real menacing beat π― This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @limtricklethemischievous! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Demon 4'! π₯ "Bad and boujee that's how I be acting" π―We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Fast flows π¨ But make sure it fits the beat, sometimes you fit too much in for the bar! Real menacing beat π― This beat choice is great for you! πΌ We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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