Yo @potato_god,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Lighting up the sky'! π₯
Good bars here, defo works here! π
Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
We like the creativity, keep on shining and we can't wait to see what you got next!
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @potato_god, It's time for us to take a look at 'Lighting up the sky'! π₯ Good bars here, defo works here! π Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. We like the creativity, keep on shining and we can't wait to see what you got next! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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I like it keep it up Try going for a deeper vocal range
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