Hey @juicedat9,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Down In her I Slip '! π₯
The vocal recording quality is great, don't change how you do it. π€
There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ There's a nice concept here running through the track, nice job.
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ
We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @juicedat9, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Down In her I Slip '! π₯ The vocal recording quality is great, don't change how you do it. π€ There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ There's a nice concept here running through the track, nice job. Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Brother this is a sweet sounding track for a new user. You should be proud of this!! Girls gonna be moist π¦π¦ Peace.
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